A good idea.....
Although I found the script to be a bit stilted and lacking in subtlety, with a few tweaks it could be really good.
thanks! yup always learning- this is my first time writing a series with interconnected episodes
some good ideas.....
I liked the premise behind it (and the multitude of different sports you managed to squeeze in). I wasn't that big a fan of the music i felt it needed something with more of a tempo. Over all good though!
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