A good idea.....
Although I found the script to be a bit stilted and lacking in subtlety, with a few tweaks it could be really good.
thanks! yup always learning- this is my first time writing a series with interconnected episodes
some good ideas.....
I liked the premise behind it (and the multitude of different sports you managed to squeeze in). I wasn't that big a fan of the music i felt it needed something with more of a tempo. Over all good though!
The only thing stopping me from giving this brilliant game 10/10 is a lack of the top scores ever done on here. if you could add that this would be perfect!!!
good idea some flaws though...
i can definetely see some really good ideas in this but there should be some alternate control options, otherwise its pretty much unplayable on a laptop
In two minds....
Half of me loves this your piece, the look, the feeling and the imagination.
But the other half is screaming 'HEATHEN!!!!' for cutting up a book.
Then ofcourse there is the little voice in the back of my mind saying recycling is good, so my loving it wins 10/10 5/5. :D
I know xD
My inner book worm cringed at the fact I was doing this...
But in a way, it is bringing further appreciation to a novel that would have sat in decay on my bookshelf for lord knows how long...
At least that is the excuse that permits me to sleep at night xD
Thank you~ <3
....but I like it!!!!!
Did you do it all in pen?
Yes, all in pen=) Almost 9 hours.
I really like this
The shading, the expression on his face and the indentation of the temple.
MUST SEE MORE!!!!
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